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Poll
Question: 2-13: What should happen to the Asura Squad?
Option 1: Run away to fight another day!
Option 2: Disband entirely!
Option 3: Turn over a new leaf?
Title: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on December 06, 2011, 09:55:42 AM
Post your feedback here!

And don't forget to vote!

I'll run the poll for a few days before writing the next part!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Ryudei on December 07, 2011, 12:16:37 AM
Good stuff Rey!  Fun read :)
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on December 12, 2011, 11:28:13 PM
Going to add the next part in a couple of days, if you still want to vote, you still have a chance!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on December 21, 2011, 12:29:39 AM
Delayed a bit longer than I should have, but 1-2 is up!

New poll up too.

And kudos if you recognize the references.
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Ryudei on December 21, 2011, 10:55:30 PM
Haha, now there's a fancy hodgepodge, I might have to use it sometime!  :D
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on December 22, 2011, 01:36:09 AM
Amazing what you think up of while tired huh?
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Lunet_Moon on December 23, 2011, 05:59:05 AM
Neat well those three are a big part of FF history. It's a cute reference I say. As far as the actual prose I have to say its great. I knew those sneaky goblins were up to no good.
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Zerila on January 06, 2012, 07:24:24 PM
This is fun, like the choose-your-own adventures I used to read when I was younger! Only, I can't keep my finger on the page I just left in case I picked a bad end :P
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Majestica on January 06, 2012, 07:58:39 PM
lol Zeri, I actually ordered some of those books a few months ago because I missed them! I have since read through them all to each ending... ;)
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on January 07, 2012, 05:56:00 AM
1-3 poll up!  Let me know if you REALLY wanna see something in particular as a choice...
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Lunet_Moon on January 07, 2012, 07:19:18 PM
Cute the latest installment was very cute. I guess trapping Lali in all those boxes finally paid off for her after all! At least in the long run I just did it to her for fun.
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on January 14, 2012, 09:10:23 PM
*shameless plug*

Only two votes so far?  Can do better than that!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on January 20, 2012, 09:15:07 PM
Aaaaand leech wins!

Next part is up!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Zerila on January 28, 2012, 01:44:21 AM
 ???
"Do you know how expensive those broth jugs are?  Now I have to go poke Hansblix for more.."  Hansblix had raised his prices too; seems some Beastmaster had offed countless numbers of his pets...




:o ;D 8)

Haha, thanks for the laugh, Rey :D
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on January 28, 2012, 02:24:55 AM
Quote from: Zerila on January 28, 2012, 01:44:21 AM
???
"Do you know how expensive those broth jugs are?  Now I have to go poke Hansblix for more.."  Hansblix had raised his prices too; seems some Beastmaster had offed countless numbers of his pets...




:o ;D 8)

Haha, thanks for the laugh, Rey :D

Thought you'd enjoy that!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on February 02, 2012, 11:29:45 AM
Next part is up.  Insomnia spawns motivation.
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on February 12, 2012, 01:49:33 PM
The last part of the story is up.  I want to thank the people that actually bothered to read and vote on the questions.  Any feedback would be nice!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Zerila on February 18, 2012, 03:28:26 AM
Feedback? Ok!
Cute story, and I really liked the "pick a path" feel of it. More stories should be written that way! :D
I thought you did a really good job with it. I have no complaints. I only apologize that I didn't read these faster... usually, when I check this site it's from work, and I don't have tons of time  :-[

Still, I really enjoyed it, and I wouldn't mind seeing more in the future! :D
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Ryudei on February 21, 2012, 12:21:49 AM
They were really fun to read at work (same as Zeri here haha), great writing and usually had me grinning to myself in my office!  My coworkers probably wondered about me if they passed by in the hall >_>;  Will miss Lali's exploits but I suppose I can bug her when you mule ;p
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on February 21, 2012, 03:30:00 AM
Quote from: Ryudei on February 21, 2012, 12:21:49 AM
Will miss Lali's exploits but I suppose I can bug her when you mule ;p

Remember that it's Chapter 1.

Who's to say I can't write more misadventures?
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Ryudei on February 21, 2012, 09:40:47 PM
Well then Tally-ho Laliho!  See you in chapter 2 ;)

(Yes, I'm holding you to it! :p)
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on February 22, 2012, 05:45:17 AM
Well, I dunno, is there a lot of demand for it?
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Majestica on February 22, 2012, 05:55:58 PM
I demand it!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on February 23, 2012, 12:50:43 AM
Well then!

Any suggestions for misadventures from the peanut gallery?
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on March 01, 2012, 01:07:42 AM
Well, due to (popular?) demand, Chapter 2 begins!  As usual, don't forget to vote!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Zerila on March 01, 2012, 04:13:36 AM
Whoo! :D
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on March 01, 2012, 07:01:19 PM
Ironically enough, even with 700+ views the story isn't even in the top 10 of most viewed topics on the site yet lol.

The site gets like 1000 views every single day which is a little mindboggling.  I kind of wonder how many unique readers actually read the story.
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Ryudei on March 03, 2012, 02:09:17 AM
Chaptaru two!!

/dance /panic /jobemote thf
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on March 04, 2012, 12:32:32 AM
Gigas it is!

Fair warning:  Chapter 2 is probably gonna be a bit long.  Then again, maybe you will enjoy it more because of it!

I'm sure some of y'all will notice the subtle references...
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on March 12, 2012, 11:52:55 PM
Well, Kazham Peppers barely won.  Probably a good thing, Lali probably would need a bath if she dove into a pile of garlic cloves.

2-3's up!  The plot thickens.
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on March 17, 2012, 09:52:50 AM
Mmm, gonna give the poll a couple more days before putting up the next part, you still have time to vote!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on March 19, 2012, 10:31:39 AM
Well, had a tie in the poll, so my vote's the tiebreaker!  So nyah!  Don't like it?  Get more people to vote!

Cookies to people who get some of the references in 2-4!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on March 26, 2012, 11:15:12 AM
Not many people must be paying attention to it lately.  Eh, I'll leave the poll up a while longer, see if I get any more bites.  I was going to put up the next part but I'll postpone it for a few days more.  Are you bored with it already?  I can stop if no one really cares.
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on March 31, 2012, 01:03:37 AM
Well, after some encouragement, the story continues.  2-5's up.

Remember, feedback encourages the wordweaver to continue!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on April 11, 2012, 06:54:30 AM
2-6's up.

*plays Stage Select music for the poll*
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on April 30, 2012, 12:16:09 AM
Been running behind on updating!  I'll try to put it up by tomorrow!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on April 30, 2012, 07:36:25 AM
2-7's finally up.  I know some of you were getting impatient.  I've been slacking.
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on May 13, 2012, 09:34:53 PM
And 2-8 is up.
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Zerila on May 18, 2012, 01:31:45 AM
I hadn't been reading this because I hadn't had time recently, but I finally started to... this is really good. I mean, REALLY good. You have a talent with words and storytelling! Looking forward to more :D
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on May 18, 2012, 06:45:02 AM
Yay for positive feedback!

The tone of it has gotten a little more serious but I still try to keep it humorous and amusing.

Been a little slow with the updates lately, I'll try to post updates a little more often!  Maybe once/week or something.
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on May 20, 2012, 09:12:33 AM
2-9's up.

Reader and friend requested cameo in this one!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Lunet_Moon on May 21, 2012, 05:36:38 AM
Ohohoho! This chapter had me in stitches! Thats exactly what I would have said! Ah the joys of being a guest nice job hun.
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on May 29, 2012, 10:58:18 PM
2-10's up.

Little shorter than usual, but last one was a bit long!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on June 09, 2012, 04:23:52 PM
Few days late, but 2-11 is up.
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on June 18, 2012, 12:51:31 AM
2-12's up.

I know some of you were eagerly anticipating this next part...

The big fight scene!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on June 30, 2012, 09:35:09 AM
Next part will be up soonish.  Someone needs to break the poll tie!
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Majestica on June 30, 2012, 03:07:10 PM
I would, if i could vote again!  8)
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on August 08, 2012, 01:43:45 PM
Got a bit distracted from updating and haven't been motivated to write more for a bit.  But, I'll try to add the next part nex tfew days!  I know some people asked me about it.
Title: Re: Adv. of Laliho Discussion Thread!
Post by: Areya on August 13, 2012, 04:28:08 PM
Okay, so it's a few weeks late.  But 2-13 is finally up.

Last part coming up.